ilze
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May 7, 2006 22:17:05 GMT 10
Post by ilze on May 7, 2006 22:17:05 GMT 10
You say
I take my pain to you And put it in your hands I lay my head in your lap My dear angel of light.
Like a waves in the sea Crushing at the shore Silent whispers of the water Your song soothes me.
You say for me to close my eyes, And fall into your arms There i'll be safe and warm When your calm words touch me.
You say to open the doors to my heart At least for a little, And to let in the sunlight inside, Step by step, not rushing it all.
You are with me. When i close my eyes to sleep, You watch over me.
I know and feel you there.
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May 9, 2006 10:55:17 GMT 10
Post by TRINITY on May 9, 2006 10:55:17 GMT 10
Ooooh ilze...your words are beautiful. You sure can write. Like I said, I am not a writer really, but for childrens stories, but your poetry is beautiful.
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ilze
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May 10, 2006 5:15:35 GMT 10
Post by ilze on May 10, 2006 5:15:35 GMT 10
*blushes a little* thanks, your comments very appreciated!
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May 10, 2006 16:44:20 GMT 10
Post by TRINITY on May 10, 2006 16:44:20 GMT 10
I think this one would go with this poem......Ths is an Angel child flying iinto the hand of God.
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